Conclusion On Interview Essay Example
Interviews can be fascinating stuff. Watching an interview with your favorite celebrity can keep you on the edge of your seat because you want to know everything about what makes that person tick.
On the opposite side of the spectrum are the dull interviews that are about as fascinating as watching paint dry.
What makes some interviews so awesome, while others are so awful?
Sometimes the person being interviewed has nothing interesting to say. Sometimes the interviewer asks all the wrong questions. And sometimes, it’s how the interview is presented to the audience.
When writing an interview essay, no matter how scintillating your subject is, if you don’t present the interview in just the right light, your paper will fall into the “as exciting as watching paint dry” category.
Let’s make your paper more appealing than drying paint, and get to work writing an interesting interview essay.
How to Write an Interesting Interview Essay
Writing is a lot like painting. Whether you’re painting a masterpiece or your bedroom, you can’t just throw paint at the surface and hope it looks right (unless of course you’re Jackson Pollock).
If you’re writing an essay, you can’t just type words and hope they sound right, either. Both take careful planning (and a lot of practice).
When writing an interview essay that you hope will be your masterpiece, you need to keep the following points in mind.
Know your purpose
Okay, maybe you don’t need to know your life’s purpose in order to write an interview essay, but you do need to know your purpose for writing the paper.
Sure, you’re writing the paper because it’s an assignment, and you need to write it in order to pass your class. But you also need to check the assignment guidelines to learn the paper’s purpose.
In most cases, you’ll be writing an interview essay to illustrate a dominant impression of the person you’re interviewing. You could write to show your readers how kind your neighbor is or how funny your dad is, or you might highlight a person’s accomplishments or strengths.
You can write the paper from a number of different angles, but as long as readers get to know the person and understand the dominant impression, you’ve accomplished your goal.
Here’s how to do that.
Plan and conduct the interview
A successful interview is essential to a successful interview essay.
If you’ve ever had a job interview, you know that your prospective employer has already done some research about you and will be conducting the interview with a set of prepared questions. You should follow this lead.
Before the interview:
- Learn what you can about the person you’re interviewing. If you’re interviewing your sister or your roommate, maybe there’s not much to research. But if you’re interviewing a professional or local celebrity, you’ll probably be able to learn more about him or her through a basic online search.
- Prepare a set of interview questions. Interview questions should be clear and succinct, with the goal of learning specific information.
You might ask closed questions that require a “yes” or “no” answer or that gather factual information, such as when your interviewee was born or what type of degree he or she holds.
But you should also ask open questions that allow the respondent to discuss information in greater detail. These types of questions might ask things that give insight into how a person feels about something or how he or she overcame a specific struggle.
During the interview:
- Take notes. You won’t remember everything the person says, so take careful notes. If the interviewee gives you permission, you might record your discussion.
- Be respectful.
After the interview:
- Look through your notes and find examples and quotes that will help you establish the dominant impression and help readers get to know the person.
- As you identify the key information that will go into your paper, outline your ideas. Unless your prof has said otherwise, your outline should follow a standard essay format, with an introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.
Draft your essay
An interview essay generally contains the standard elements of an essay (introduction, body, and conclusion), but make sure your paper achieves its goal by including the best possible information.
- Include a catchy opening line. Consider using a quote or anecdote about the person that will not only interest your readers but will also illustrate your dominant impression and help readers learn more about the person you’ve interviewed.
- Include a specific thesis statement. In an interview essay, the thesis statement should identify the focus of your paper. Remember, if the dominant impression of your paper is the kindness of your neighbor, the thesis statement should reflect this.
- Help the readers get to know the person. Include additional examples, quotes, and stories about the person to help show readers who the person is. For example, if you’re writing about your kind neighbor, you might tell the story of how he volunteered at the local homeless shelter, rescued stray animals, and helped a coworker in need.
- Wrap up the essay. Bring the essay to closure by restating key ideas and leaving readers with a strong impression of the person.
Before You Label It a Masterpiece
After you’ve drafted your paper, don’t submit it to your prof until you’ve done the following:
- Take a look at your notes again. Review your notes once more to make sure you didn’t forget an important story and to make sure you’ve accurately quoted your subject.
- Review and revise your paper. Read through your paper once or twice looking for sections that need reworking. If you need a little help with the revision process, read How to Revise an Essay and Make It Better Than Ever.
- Read a few example essays.Check out a few examples to see how other writers have tackled their interview essays. If you’d like to see a couple annotated examples, read 2 Interview Papers That Ask All the Right Questions.
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- The conclusion needs to 1. restate the paper’s main points 2. answer the question, “Who cares?”, and 3. finish the paper with something punchy.
You have written a beautiful introduction and body, and now you have to finish the draft off by writing the conclusion! You want to finish strong and leave the reader with an interesting closing thought.
That being said, your concluding paragraph has to 1. briefly summarize your work (without sounding redundant), 2. illustrate why your paper is significant, and 3. end with a punch.
The conclusion should be formatted like an upside-down introduction–from the most specific to the most general. Therefore, the first sentence of your conclusion paragraph should describe the main points of your paper:
“Although there were a variety of lesser factors, the ultimate demise of the Roman Empire was a result of three main ones: poor leadership, outside pressure from barbarian forces, and weakening cultural unity.”
“Although Microsoft, Google, and Apple have similar company roots–nerdy college-aged kids tinkering around in garages–they have developed into very different companies. Apple has developed around the personality of a single person, while Microsoft and Google–while heavily influenced by their founders–have taken a less centralized approach.”
The trick with this sentence (or two) is to reiterate your paper’s main idea without sounding redundant. Copying and pasting your thesis is not a good idea. Another bad idea is to start out with a hollow-sounding phrase like “In conclusion,” “In summary,” or “As a whole.” These not-so-subtle phrases are sure to bore your reader.
Next, your conclusion has to relate your issue to a broader idea or question. Let’s say you’re writing a paper on symbolism and social overtones in The Crucible (a play by Arthur Miller about the Salem Witch Trials). In your conclusion, you should explain why your paper is significant.
Who cares? Who cares about Miller’s use of symbolism?
Your conclusion should make a link between the contents of your paper and a larger issue. A larger issue could be something like
- How the social overtones in the book have influenced how people view the Salem Witch Trials in hindsight
- How Miller’s style has influenced other playwrights or authors
- How Miller’s use of symbolism was seen by his contemporaries
Now is not the time to make a wild, unsupported claim. A small connection will suffice.
[Sentence restating paper’s main points about symbols in Miller’s play.] Miller’s use of symbolism in The Crucible dramatizes the hypothetical Salem described in his play. Such dramatization calls into question how much the theoretical Salem in Miller’s play differed from the historical Salem, which is a key question that makes the play so controversial and enduring.
The ‘larger issue’ here is how Miller’s use of symbolism helps underscore the difference between the Salem described in the play and the historical Salem. The difference between the two is a key question.
Another technique you might use for your conclusion is to describe where additional study needs to be done–where your essay stops and another essay could start.
At the end of your conclusion, you should have a punchy sentence that leaves your reader with an interesting thought. One way of doing this is to reconnect your ending sentence with your title:
Say you’re writing a paper on the similarities of Zeus and his son Hercules:
Title: Like Father, Like Son: Exploring Paternal Relationships in Greek Mythology
Concluding sentences: Hercules’ demeanor, athleticism, and attitude are similar to that of his father, Zeus. Both gods exemplify Greek ideals of masculinity. Greek mythological texts, then, reinforce the idea that fathers should pass Greek cultural values onto their sons. The story of Hercules reinforces the colloquial phrase, “like father, like son.”
Here the ‘larger issue’ is how Greek cultural values are shaped by Greek mythology. The ending is punchy. It contains a nice, memorable phrase and circles back to the interesting title.